Can you see what's special, different, unique about the first haiku? If so, please comment, thanks.
our choice what to do with them
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Can you see what's special, different, unique about the first haiku? If so, please comment, thanks.
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Reading the first haiku from top to bottom and then from bottom to top gives it a special, different, and unique flavor!
Thanks, but there's something else... look again...
Every word is one syllable
YES!! You're amazing
just a word nerd 🤓
Btw, I love that one!
Captures spirit & style of haiku: simple, direct, meditative. Captures tam of fleeting moment. (When recited, short 5-7-5 structure ideally mirrors a single breath. Very Jewish!)
I love that one! Beautiful example of haiku style & spirit: simple, direct, mini meditation. Reaches out to capture a brief moment in passing.
(Btw, short 5-7-5 structure meant to reflect a single breath. Kabbalistic, no?)
(Oops! Thought 1st one not published)
Thanks... maybe we should have a haiku party or cinquain
I can delete all the extra
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