I think it's great!

Yid with a Lid did a great Havel Havelim, but it's not the Havel Havelim he had hoped to do.

Now, YwL, I must tell you something. Listen to me, please.
Many years ago, when I was studying modern dance, yes, one of my former lives of sorts, when I was studying choreography, we were told a performance trick, which I've tried to adopt to all occasions. If you fall, rise gracefully, as if it was part of the choreography.

Honestly, if you hadn't kvetched in your introduction, I would have considered that your very legitimate theme.

Refuah Shleimah to your wife.